Thu Nov 8, 2007 6:50 PM
NameLouie Lawent
Email
Where are you from?Oregon
Favourite poem
Any other comments? I MAY SEE GOD
I don't see God in a cypress
- his beard as a mountain slope
I don't see God in continental drift
- in Mother Nature's braindead clock of consciousness
but I may see Him as its winder
I may see God in the intricacies of my incomprehension
I don't see God in the computer simulation of our sun's inaugural journey
I may sense His handiwork, but the Divinity of motion stops me short
I may see God in the big bang singularity
... I may see me as his anthropic principle witness of
the ungodly improbabilities of the galaxies' formation
I may see God in entropy's precision
... I may see physics' proofs as God done better than unevolved theology
I don't see God in the eyes of a descendant of interstellar dust,
the predecessor of the monkey
but I see God in the genius of a formula to put monkey in my face
I don't see God in biblical passages that crucify Father Time
that contain missing narrative links
... I would only see laws of physics in an extraterrestrial being
but I would see God in any supernatural ghost
I may see God as the reality of His hypothetical
I may feel God as a tap on my shoulder
as an abrupt scratch on my cheek
as a voice that yanks me from the tail end of a dream
I may see God as one of assorted failures
as a God without omniscience
as a God who sometimes throws it and sees what sticks
I don't see God in prophecies that require Armageddon as route to Rapture
I may see God as reward for man's moral progression
I may see God in my doubts
Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:00 PM
NameJulie
Emailbonzie1984@yahoo.com
Where are you from?Massachusetts
Favourite poemALL
Any other comments?Read every poem that I could find. Love them. They are very inspirational and I hope to see new ones. I write poems in a notebook and put their respectable names and authors with them. I go to a poetry center in my area and I share them by reading them on stage. Hopefully the crowd will love these poems as much as I do. Thanks for the inspiration.
Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:48 PM
NameSamantha DeWitt
Emailnobodyz_angel15@hotmail.com
Where are you from?Rapid City South Dakota (USA)
Favourite poemCosmic Angel
Any other comments?Your poems are deep and have much meaning to them. I hope you write more so that I can come back and read them.
Sat Jul 21, 2007 11:35 AM
NameHelen
Emailabbott_family_56@hotmail.com
Where are you from?Solihull
Favourite poemDeath For Five Voices/Renewal
Any other comments?Some were disturbing,others uplifting some thought provoking.I will come back and read some more.
Thu Jul 3, 2003 3:22 PM
NameAoibheann
EmailAoibheannmoonflower@hotmail.co
Where are you from?Ireland
Favourite poemDiscarded Love & Cosmic Angel
Any other comments?WoW!!! Im so touched and moved by such beautiful poetry. Thank you deeply for sharing with me. I am a poet also, and i feel your pain, and enlightenment. Your words give me hope that there are people out there who understand and appreciate the beauty of love and life.
Thu Jun 5, 2003 8:30 AM
Namerachael Hack
EmailRachael_hack2@agilent.com
Where are you from?Ipswich, Suffolk, England
Favourite poemLove knows no boundries
Any other comments?Really good site, all peoms are really good.
Sat Mar 8, 2003 5:49 PM
NameLaura-Sue Bennett
Emailsoftiesue@hotmail.com
Where are you from?Dundee, Scotland
Favourite poemAll
Any other comments?This site is wonderful, such beautiful poems and angels. Thank you for cheering me up!
Thu Feb 20, 2003 3:42 AM
Namechinky dane cortes seraspi
Emailiky_02@hotmail.com
Where are you from?philippines
Favourite poemyou
Any other comments?this is a cool site!!
Wed Feb 19, 2003 1:59 AM
NameMaria
Emailmarakitri@hotmail.com
Where are you from?Greece
Favourite poemHeavenly Meeting
Any other comments?This site can definitely touch everyones soul as it did mine. Thanks for sharing...
Fri Feb 14, 2003 1:16 PM
Namearabianemperess
Emailarabianemperess@yahoo.com
Where are you from?Trinidad & Tobago
Favourite poemits hard to choose a favorite
Any other comments?I am a lover of poems and its very nice to have a site where one can go and read them. All the poems were lovely. A magnificent display of words combined to create masterpieces. Keep up the good work.
Mon Feb 3, 2003 5:07 PM
Nametracey
Emailtraciemill@msn.com
Where are you from?Scotland
Favourite poemHeaven Sent
Any other comments?What a wonderful, inspiring site!!! Thank you so much for sharing.
I too believe in angels, please visit my site at www.jordanstime.com and let me know what you think. xxxx
Tue Jan 28, 2003 1:21 PM
Namejade faulkner
Emailjadefaulkner@hotmail.com
Where are you from?england
Favourite poemall of them
Any other comments?your poems are so beautiful.
Fri Jan 17, 2003 6:29 PM
Nameangel with a blackened soul
Emailyungling@activemail.co.uk
Where are you from?wakefield england
Favourite poemcosmic angel
Any other comments?this site would be aload better if it had a picture gallery to go with the poems
Thu Jan 9, 2003 3:30 PM
NameLadyBrazen (Patti)
EmailHottnFrostyStar@aol.com
Where are you from?PA
Favourite poem
Any other comments?This is a very sweet place to visit. I read your work and still am very impressed. I do so love all of them, I like how you have done this site and wish you the best of luck with it!!!!
Sat Dec 21, 2002 9:45 AM
NameBobbi S
Emailbobisoo@msn.com
Where are you from?MT USA
Favourite poemAll
Any other comments?This is an excellent site my friend! I'm so glad that we got to know one another. It really is a "soulful" site and an uplifting place to go. A new favorite place for me.
Peace and Love,
Bobbi
Sat Dec 21, 2002 12:20 AM
NameVicky
Emailvickydavies239@hotmail.com
Where are you from?Suffolk
Favourite poemCosmic Angel
Any other comments?Nigel...wow you must have loved someone so deeply, so very much, and then suffered a heartbreaking loss to write such bittersweet poems. Though one senses much pain and loss, there is a positive aspect to your poems. Thank you for sharing. It's a beautiful site, and I'm just a tad envious because I've never been able to write poetry :)
Keep it coming, and take care.
vicky xxx